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Monday, September 27, 2010

PIE Paragraph

In  Star Wars IV and Bule Diamondthey used uncenerty of would go on durring their wuest. Lukes wanted to search for his father and the fource. Obi-Wan helped him along with R2D2, C3PO, Han Solo and Chewbacca to finish his quest. In Blue Diamond doug was forced but his friend to go to Planet Hollywood but ended up in Las Vegas. Doug didn't know his friend was planning to kill him self and his friend was their to stop him or watcxh him die. Both stories ended with the hero getting a gift that they did not want to recive.
By: Chris Roehl

1 comment:

  1. Your comparison of Doug and Luke should go beyond simply listing similarities and differences between the two stories. Remember that the goal is to look at Doug within the context of the Hero's Journey and explain whether he is a true hero or not. Your paragraph needs supporting examples that are more closely matched to the hero's journey traits. Your paragraph also needs to have a more clearly defined thesis.

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